一、成考英語作文真題回放內(nèi)容
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　　閱讀下面短文,然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
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　　On the first day of her work, Sally found that a class full of problems was waiting for her; six teachers had quit before her. When she walked into the classroom,it was chaos: two boys were fighting in the far corner, yet the rest of the class seemed not to notice them; some girls were chatting and some were running about; paper,food packages and other garbage were littered around. Just when she was about to speak, a student rushed in and pushed her aside! He was twenty minutes late!
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　　Sally walked onto the platform, picked up a piece of chalk and wrote on the blackboard: Rule 1: We are family! All students stopped to look at her. And she continued with Rule 2, Rule 3... In the following weeks, sally worked out 10 class rules and posted them on the walls of the classroom. She patiently explained all the rules to the students and required everyone to follow them.
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　　Surprisingly, Sally was not driven out like the former teachers; instead, she won respect from the students.Over the year, she witnessed gradual change in the class.At the graduation ceremony, Just as she expected. she was very proud to stand with a class of care, manners and confidence.
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　　[寫作內(nèi)容]
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　　1.用約30個詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。
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　　2.用約120個詞就班規(guī)談?wù)勀愕南敕?內(nèi)容包括:(1)你們班最突出的問題是什么?(2)針對該間題你會設(shè)計一條什么班規(guī)?(3)你認為班規(guī)會帶來什么影響?
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　　[寫作要求]
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　　1.作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事,也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文的句子。
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　　2.作文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱。
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　　二、成考英語作文范文
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　　From the passage we know when Sally found there were so many problems among her new students,she didn't lose heart.She made some rules full of love and respect to manage"her students.In return,her students took on a completely new look.
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　　When it comes to my class, I have to say that I can't stand some classmates' whisper to others when the teachers are presenting knowledge.Maybe they are showing interest in what is explained but most of the time, they are talking about something having nothing to do with the contents of the class. They may disturb the teachers' thought.Worst of all,they show no respect to our teachers. For the phenomenon, I propose to make a rule which says We Are Friends. We all hope to have more friends. But it's hard for us to make true friends.
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　　I believe when we remember the rule,we remind ourselves that being the best listener is the first step to have friends. Our teachers are our friends. I believe all the classmates will not interrupt the teachers when they remember the rule.
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　　三、成考英語作文范文解析:
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　　①when引導了一個時間狀語從句,詳細闡述事件經(jīng)過,高度概括文章主題。678招生考試網(wǎng)認為among介詞短語用的十分傳神。
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　?、贗n return是很棒的連接短語。本句十分符合邏輯,作者寫作極具條理性。
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　?、坶L句含有多個從句:that引導的賓語從向,When引導的時間狀語從句,高級句式為文章添彩。678招生考試信息網(wǎng)認為whisper運用極為精妙,準確講述了上課時耳語的鏡頭。
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　?、躻orst of all不僅僅是過渡詞,還突出了遞進效果,文章立顯層次感。
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　?、輜hich引導的非限定性定語從句,進一步解釋rule,文章內(nèi)容詳實,符合邏輯。
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　?、轎 believe開啟的總結(jié)句內(nèi)含多亮點: Interrupt屬高級詞匯,when引導的時間狀語從句。678招生信息網(wǎng)認為作者寫作能力可見一斑。
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　　四、成考英語作文范文點評
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　　這篇佳作緊密圍繞命題提示展開,30多個詞的短文高度概括了材料內(nèi)容,足見作者能力出眾。正文部分,作者詳細講述了自己班級存在的問題,分析成因,并給出了合理的、符合實際的建議。且最后部分有相信新規(guī)會起到積極作用。文章布局有點題,有詳釋,有建議,有感想,可謂結(jié)構(gòu)合理,條理清晰。加上多個高級勺式的運用,使文章說服力大增,文章層次立刻提升很多。輔以多條短句的配合,文章錯落有致,可讀感很強?？傊?這篇作文無論是結(jié)構(gòu)還是內(nèi)容,語法還是思想,都做得十分完美。
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　　五、成考英語作文范文譯文
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　　從文章中我們知道,莎麗發(fā)現(xiàn)她的新學生們有這么多問題,她并沒有失去信心。她對“管理”她的學生制定了一些充滿愛和尊重的規(guī)則。作為回報,她的學生們展現(xiàn)了一個全新的面貌。
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　　談到我的課堂,我不得不說,當老師們在傳授知識時,我不能忍受一些同學和別人說悄悄話。也許他們對所說內(nèi)容很感興趣,但大多數(shù)時候,他們在談?wù)撆c課堂內(nèi)容無關(guān)的事情。他們可能會擾亂老師的思維。最糟糕的是,他們帶給我們老師不尊重。對于這種現(xiàn)象,我建議制定一條規(guī)則,就是“我們是朋友”。我們都希望有更多的朋友。但是我們很難交到真正的朋友。
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　　我相信,當我們記住這條規(guī)則時,我們提醒自己,做最好的傾聽者是擁有朋友的第一步。我們的老師是我們的朋友。我相信所有的同學在記住規(guī)則時都不會打斷老師。