一、真題回放內(nèi)容
　　.
　　閱讀下面短文,然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。
　　.
　　On the first day of her work, Sally found that a class full of problems was waiting for her; six teachers had quit before her. When she walked into the classroom,it was chaos: two boys were fighting in the far corner, yet the rest of the class seemed not to notice them; some girls were chatting and some were running about; paper,food packages and other garbage were littered around. Just when she was about to speak, a student rushed in and pushed her aside! He was twenty minutes late!
　　.
　　Sally walked onto the platform, picked up a piece of chalk and wrote on the blackboard: Rule 1: We are family! All students stopped to look at her. And she continued with Rule 2, Rule 3... In the following weeks, sally worked out 10 class rules and posted them on the walls of the classroom. She patiently explained all the rules to the students and required everyone to follow them.
　　.
　　Surprisingly, Sally was not driven out like the former teachers; instead, she won respect from the students.Over the year, she witnessed gradual change in the class.At the graduation ceremony, Just as she expected. she was very proud to stand with a class of care, manners and confidence.
　　.
　　[寫作內(nèi)容]
　　.
　　1.用約30個(gè)詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。
　　.
　　2.用約120個(gè)詞就班規(guī)談?wù)勀愕南敕?內(nèi)容包括:(1)你們班最突出的問(wèn)題是什么?(2)針對(duì)該間題你會(huì)設(shè)計(jì)一條什么班規(guī)?(3)你認(rèn)為班規(guī)會(huì)帶來(lái)什么影響?
　　.
　　[寫作要求]
　　.
　　1.作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事,也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文的句子。
　　.
　　2.作文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
　　.
　　二、作文范文
　　.
　　Confronted with the misbehavior of her new class, Sally emphasized the idea of“we are family"and regulated the students' conduct,which have shaped them to be confident and well behaved.
　　.
　　One obvious problem with our class is the lack of team work.Everyone is minding their own business, thus giving rise to inefficiency in their study and even putting a limit to their potential.
　　.
　　To address the issue,I would make it a rule that every Friday I divide them into groups of four and assign a project for them to complete.
　　.
　　From where I stand, this rule will definitely exert a profound and far-reaching effect on students' academic performance. First and foremost,we can combine our skills and knowledge as well as motivate each other for greater achievements.Additionally, studying in a group will share our experiences in solving problems more efficiently as well as promote our teamwork spirit.
　　.
　　三、作文范文解析
　　.
　?、賓mphasize和 regulate兩個(gè)高級(jí)詞匯均是動(dòng)詞,簡(jiǎn)要闡述Sally的行為過(guò)程。
　　.
　?、趙hich引導(dǎo)的非限定性定語(yǔ)從句,準(zhǔn)確講述了故事的結(jié)果,678招生考試網(wǎng)認(rèn)為作者語(yǔ)言高度濃縮,足見組織語(yǔ)言的“真功夫”。
　　.
　?、踥bvious置于problem前,突出存在的問(wèn)題。the lack of高級(jí)詞組運(yùn)用準(zhǔn)確,正宗的英文表述法。
　　.
　　④to address the issue,高級(jí)詞組運(yùn)用憐當(dāng)。動(dòng)詞不定式置于句首,避免句子單調(diào)雷同,缺乏新意。
　　.
　?、蓍L(zhǎng)句式內(nèi)容豐富,邏輯合理闡準(zhǔn)確。且 definitely、profound、far-reaching、academic和performance屬高級(jí)詞匯,作者詞匯量令人佩服。
　　.
　?、辸ill開啟的句子準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)了新規(guī)實(shí)行后可能的效果,內(nèi)容積極正面,傳遞正能量。solve、efficient、as well as、promote等均是高級(jí)詞匯。
　　.
　　四、名師點(diǎn)評(píng)
　　.
　　通讀全篇，678招生考試信息網(wǎng)認(rèn)為作者深諳各種從句運(yùn)用之技,如 which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句、where引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句做介詞賓語(yǔ)、 where引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句做介詞賓語(yǔ)等,各種類型的從句層出不窮。高級(jí)句式和高級(jí)詞江的運(yùn)用在準(zhǔn)確闡述文章內(nèi)容基礎(chǔ)上,還提升文章層次。thus、 to address from where I stand、 first and foremost等過(guò)渡短語(yǔ)的運(yùn)用則使文章結(jié)構(gòu)更緊湊,過(guò)渡更自然,行文連貫,讀起來(lái)非常爽快?？傊?678招生信息網(wǎng)認(rèn)為本篇佳作要點(diǎn)齊全,結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,邏輯合理,語(yǔ)法精妙,是一篇難得的臨場(chǎng)佳作。
　　.
　　五、譯文
　　.
　　莎莉面對(duì)的新班級(jí)的不端行為,她強(qiáng)調(diào)“我們是一家人”,規(guī)范學(xué)生的行為理念,塑造了他們自信、良好行為。
　　.
　　我們班的一個(gè)明顯的問(wèn)題是缺乏團(tuán)隊(duì)工作。每個(gè)只專注于自己的事,從而導(dǎo)致他們的學(xué)習(xí)效率低下,甚至限制他們的潛力。
　　.
　　解決這個(gè)間題。我會(huì)制定個(gè)規(guī)則:每到星期五把他們分成四組,分配一個(gè)項(xiàng)目來(lái)完成。
　　.
　　從我的立場(chǎng)來(lái)看,這一規(guī)定必將對(duì)學(xué)生的學(xué)業(yè)成績(jī)產(chǎn)生深遠(yuǎn)而積極的影響。
　　.
　　首先,我們可以把我們的技能和知識(shí)結(jié)合起來(lái),互相激勵(lì),取得更大的成就。此外,小組學(xué)習(xí)將有助于我們更有效地解決問(wèn)題,提升我們的團(tuán)隊(duì)精神。