一、江蘇成考的英語作文真題回放內(nèi)容
　　
　　請闊讀下面短文,并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。
　　
　　In recent years Internet voting has become increasingly popular in China.People not only cast online votes themselves, but also urge others to vote for competitions like the"Most Beautiful Teacher"and the" Cutest Baby".
　　
　　Li Jiang, a high school student, is invited to vote in the "Best Police Officer" competition, organized by the local government to let the public have a better understanding of police officers'daily work. Li Jiang visits the website and reads all the stories. He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds. He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future.
　　
　　Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the" Future Singer"competition. He has already received three similar invitations this week. His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition, the family will win an overseas tour for free. Su Hua likes his cousin very much, but he finds other singers perform even better. To vote or not to vote? This is a question that troubles him very much.
　　
　　二、范文
　　
　　Voting on the Internet is becoming more and more popular. Many people are invited to vote on some competitions. Some people can benefit from taking part in online voting, while some people are put into a dilemma over who they should vote for.
　　
　　I think that there are two major positive aspects of online voting as follows".For one thing, it can appeal to people taking an active part in all kinds of social events, For another, people can benefit from voting on the Internet,like Li Jiang mentioned in the passage, and get instant feedback.
　　
　　However, as far as' m concerned, online voting has begun to show its negative effects on people. Some people use their social networking resources to win competitions instead of counting on their own abilities, which obviously shows unfairness. What's more, sometimes online voting can make voters puzzled about who should be chosen.Which one is more important, emotion or fairness?To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of online voting into full play,and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of online voting.
　　
　　三、解析:
　　
　?、賏re invited屬被動語態(tài),作者運用多種表達法非常嫻熟,注重保持文章表達方式多樣性。
　　
　?、趙hile引導的一個并列句,復雜句式運用使內(nèi)容更豐富,闡述更合理。dilemma進退兩難,高級詞江,準確闡述現(xiàn)狀,十分傳神。
　　
　　③that引導的同位語從句,高級句式為文章添彩。major、positive、aspect屬高級詞匯、句話亮點多多。
　　
　　④長句式亮點很多:soil networking、obviously、unfa-irness屬高級詞匯。which引導的非限定性定語從句,高級句式。
　　
　?、菽膫€更重要?作者以反問形式提出異議,充分顯示了辯證技巧。 emotion屬高級詞匯。
　　
　?、拮髡呓o出自己建議后,相信在線投票會變得越來越好。態(tài)度積極樂觀,充滿正能量。
　　
　　四、點評
　　
　　678招生考試信息網(wǎng)認為作者在闡述網(wǎng)絡投票的優(yōu)缺點時,每方面都列舉了兩個實例來證明,且每個事例都有詳細的解釋,不僅內(nèi)容充實,理由也符合邏輯,充分顯示了作者豐富的辨證技巧和語言組織能力。高級句式如并列句、定語從句、反問句等運用則豐富了文章表達方式,間接提升文章層次,亮點之一。678招生考試網(wǎng)認為作者應用了高級詞匯如major、positiv、aspect、social networking、obviously、unfairness等運用則使闡述更精準,提升文章表達效果。總之,678招生信息網(wǎng)認為本篇滿分佳作做到了結構合理,論述詳細,符合邏輯,內(nèi)容和細節(jié)兼顧,結構和層次清晰,各方面都堪稱完美。
　　
　　五、譯文
　　
　　在網(wǎng)上投票越來越受歡迎。很多人都被邀在一些比賽里投票。有些人可以從網(wǎng)上投票中獲益,而有些人卻陷入了他們應該投票給誰的兩難境地。
　　
　　我認為網(wǎng)上投票有兩個主要的積極方面。一方面,它可以吸引人們積極參加各種社會活動。另一方面,人們可以從網(wǎng)上投票中獲益,如文章中提到的李江,并得到即時反饋。
　　
　　然而,就我個人而言,網(wǎng)上投票已經(jīng)開始顯示出它對人們的負面影響。有些人利用自己的社交網(wǎng)絡資源來蠃得比賽,而不是依靠自已的能力,這顯然是不公平的。更重要約是,有時網(wǎng)上投票會使選民對應該選擇誰感到困惑。情感和公平,哪一個更重要?總之,我們應該充分發(fā)揮網(wǎng)上投票的優(yōu)勢,同時盡量減少不利因素的影響。惟其如此,我們才能會更好地利用網(wǎng)上投票。