一、江蘇成考的真題回放內(nèi)容
　　
　　請(qǐng)闊讀下面短文,并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。
　　
　　In recent years Internet voting has become increasingly popular in China.People not only cast online votes themselves, but also urge others to vote for competitions like the"Most Beautiful Teacher"and the" Cutest Baby".
　　
　　Li Jiang, a high school student, is invited to vote in the "Best Police Officer" competition, organized by the local government to let the public have a better understanding of police officers'daily work. Li Jiang visits the website and reads all the stories. He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds. He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future.
　　
　　Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the" Future Singer"competition. He has already received three similar invitations this week. His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition, the family will win an overseas tour for free. Su Hua likes his cousin very much, but he finds other singers perform even better. To vote or not to vote? This is a question that troubles him very much.
　　
　　二、范文
　　
　　Online voting becomes more and more popular.Many people get involved in online voting in many competitions, some of which are helpful to people, while some of which make people confused about whether to vote or not.
　　
　　In my view, online voting is a new product of the development of modern science and technology.It's convenient for people to participate in some public events,wherever and whenever they take place.Beside,on-line voting can save lots of natural resources,especially paper. What's more,voting on the Internet can get instant feedback and the result of the competition.
　　
　　However,as a popular saying goes,"Ever coin has two sides."and online voting is no exception. It has its negative effects. For one thing, people feel confused, not because they don't like voting, but because they don't know how to make a decision a about voting which depends on competitive fairness.For another,it's unfair to some degree, because sometimes people don't vote for the best competitor. So, online voting should be completed further. If so, things will turn for the better. In short, I am in favor of online voting.
　　
　　三、解析:
　　
　?、僮魑拈_門見山,直接引入話題語言簡潔高效,讀起來朗朗上口。
　　
　　2)it's convenient for people to...經(jīng)典句型運(yùn)用,ⅱ是形式主語,加上不定式結(jié)構(gòu)。678招生考試網(wǎng)認(rèn)為作者表達(dá)方式多樣,內(nèi)容豐富,表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。
　　
　?、踳hat's more作為過渡短語運(yùn)用恰當(dāng),突出文章層次,條理更清晰。
　　
　?、躰ot because...but because運(yùn)用恰當(dāng),完美解釋了投票選擇時(shí)的猶豫和困惑,文章表達(dá)效果佳。
　　
　　because引導(dǎo)了一個(gè)原因狀語從句,高級(jí)句式為文章添彩,提升文章檔次。適當(dāng)?shù)慕忉屖刮恼抡撌龈侠?富有邏輯性。
　　
　?、藿?jīng)典的總結(jié)語in short簡潔直接,表達(dá)明了,完美收官。
　　
　　四、點(diǎn)評(píng)
　　
　　本文語言簡潔大方,表達(dá)效果很棒!在闡述正反兩方面影響時(shí),678招生考試信息網(wǎng)認(rèn)為作者給出的理由非常充分,解釋也很到位,使內(nèi)容極富邏輯,清晰地論述了網(wǎng)絡(luò)投彯的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和弊端。高級(jí)句式如which引導(dǎo)的定語從句、wherever和whenever所引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句、 because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句等,運(yùn)用嫻熟,表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確,為文章增色不少。動(dòng)名詞、動(dòng)詞不定時(shí)和非謂語動(dòng)詞的運(yùn)用則凸顯作者的寫作能力和語言運(yùn)用能力。678招生信息網(wǎng)認(rèn)為過渡詞或短語 besides、especially、what's more、in short等運(yùn)用使文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,過渡自然,行文連貫,英文的質(zhì)感油然而生。
　　
　　五、譯文
　　
　　在線投票越來越受歡迎。很多人參與了很多比賽的網(wǎng)上投票,其中有些是對(duì)人有益的,有些則讓人對(duì)是否投票感到困惑。
　　
　　在我看來,網(wǎng)上投票是現(xiàn)代科學(xué)技術(shù)發(fā)展的新產(chǎn)物。無論何時(shí)何地,人們都可以方便地參加一些公共活動(dòng)。此外,網(wǎng)上投票可以節(jié)省大量的自然資源,特別是紙張。另外,在網(wǎng)上投票可以得到即時(shí)反饋和競爭的結(jié)果。
　　
　　然而,常言道,“硬幣都有正反兩面”,網(wǎng)上投票也不例外,也有其負(fù)面影響。一方面,人們感到困惑,并非他們不喜歡投票,而是因?yàn)樗麄儾恢廊绾螞Q定投票,這涉及到競爭的公平性。另一方面,在某種程度上它并不公平,因?yàn)橛袝r(shí)人們并不會(huì)投票給表現(xiàn)最好的競爭者。因此,網(wǎng)上投票應(yīng)該進(jìn)一步完善,如果是這樣的話,情況會(huì)好轉(zhuǎn)的。簡言之,我贊成網(wǎng)上投票。