一、江蘇高考的英語作文真題回放內(nèi)容
請(qǐng)闊讀下面短文,并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。
In recent years Internet voting has become increasingly popular in China.People not only cast online votes themselves, but also urge others to vote for competitions like the"Most Beautiful Teacher"and the" Cutest Baby".
Li Jiang, a high school student, is invited to vote in the "Best Police Officer" competition, organized by the local government to let the public have a better understanding of police officers'daily work. Li Jiang visits the website and reads all the stories. He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds. He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future.
Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the" Future Singer"competition. He has already received three similar invitations this week. His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition, the family will win an overseas tour for free. Su Hua likes his cousin very much, but he finds other singers perform even better. To vote or not to vote? This is a question that troubles him very much.
【寫作內(nèi)容】
1.用約30個(gè)單詞寫出上文概要;
2.用約120個(gè)單詞闡述你對(duì)網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票的看法,并用2-3個(gè)理由或論據(jù)支撐你的看法。
【寫作要求
1.寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句;
2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱;
3.不必寫標(biāo)題。(滿分25分)
二、高考英語作文試題解讀
這是一則讀寫模式的命題,即要求考生先讀所給信息和材料,了解其大致意思,先用30個(gè)詞準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)全文概要,然后再用一篇作文闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)。678招生考試網(wǎng)認(rèn)為文章的主要話題是當(dāng)前十分流行網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票和微信點(diǎn)贊,要求考生針對(duì)這一社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)。之所以成為話題是由于觀點(diǎn)不同,意見各異。本篇中,有些人認(rèn)為投票是考慮到親情友情,對(duì)他們投票是情感因素之一,表達(dá)對(duì)他們支持和肯定的行為;有些人認(rèn)為不應(yīng)給他們投票,是基于公平公正原則,即給表現(xiàn)并不出色的親友投票違反這一原則;有的人認(rèn)為頻繁的被拉來投票已經(jīng)影響了自己的正常生活……
考生碰到這類命題通常出現(xiàn)以下問題,即不知從何下手,該如何布局寫作,或腦海里已有大致框架,但組織材料出現(xiàn)問題。678招生考試信息網(wǎng)認(rèn)為具體表現(xiàn)在:①面對(duì)信息不知道如何組織材料;②審題不仔細(xì),沒準(zhǔn)確把握命題者目的,可能出現(xiàn)文不對(duì)題情況;③論述時(shí)缺乏啟承轉(zhuǎn)折,說服力不高,表達(dá)效果欠佳④受漢語思維禁錮,不自覺地用了中文思維模式。
話題作文一般根據(jù)寫作要求大致可以下圖結(jié)構(gòu)來布局:
根據(jù)導(dǎo)圖可將作文設(shè)為三段:第一段對(duì)所給材料進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)要概述,并巧妙引入話題,屬點(diǎn)題部分(Beginning);第二段闡述這一現(xiàn)象給人們帶來的雙面影響,即積極的和消極的,本部分屬正文(Body),篇幅較長;第三段綜合對(duì)比兩方面影響,然后給出自己的觀點(diǎn),且觀點(diǎn)要積極正面,符合主流價(jià)值觀,這部分屬結(jié)尾段( The ending)。678招生信息網(wǎng)認(rèn)為考生也可根據(jù)需求將第二段正文(Beginning)拆分為兩段,一段將正面影響,一段講消極影響。闡述時(shí)應(yīng)加入恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞,避免過渡生硬,使文章可讀性強(qiáng)。為提高文章檔次和增加亮點(diǎn),應(yīng)適時(shí)加入高級(jí)詞匯,運(yùn)用多種表達(dá)法,包括高級(jí)復(fù)合句。
三、高考英語作文寫作要點(diǎn)
(1)簡(jiǎn)要闡述文章內(nèi)容,并巧妙引入話題。
(2)詳細(xì)闡述網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票的積極影響,或正面價(jià)值,2-3條為宜。
(3)論述網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票的消極影響或弊端,2-3條為宜。
(4)結(jié)合兩面影響,給出自己的觀點(diǎn)和見解,亦或提出應(yīng)對(duì)策略。
四、高考英語作文可用素材
1)詞匯
become popular with、involve...in...、competition、natural resource、technology、convenient、feedback、 fairness、be beneficial to、put sb.into a dilemma、vote for、in one s view、regardless of、work out、depend on、take advantage of
(2)句式
Generally speaking,it is widely believed there are two major positive aspects of... However,as a popular saying goes,every coin has... To be honest,voters sometimes feel annoyed, not because.In my opinion, online voting is an inseparable part of. To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of... We should reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case,we will definitely make...
五、高考英語作文注意事項(xiàng)
(1)文章結(jié)構(gòu)要合理,既有概要統(tǒng)領(lǐng),也有分項(xiàng)詳細(xì)解釋。
(2)用詞要準(zhǔn)確,闡述要細(xì)致,前后句要符合邏輯。
(3)闡述自己觀點(diǎn)時(shí),要態(tài)度明確,切忌跑題。
(4)注意行文連貫,過渡自然,可加入適當(dāng)?shù)倪^渡詞或短語。
(5)注意卷面干凈整潔,確保顏值分。
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